to day for writing we have made poem and this week we have been working on descriptive words and metafores and ajectives and this poem\ stroy is about Bazza the bear or Barry the bear.

Barry is a beautiful bear

And is stuck up on top of miss rogers wightbord and 

Really 

Really 

Yucky and stinky and very 

Tall and very 

High above the ground on miss rogers whiteboard

Everything i said is fake 

But 

Everything might be true
And he is good at being still 

Right am i right come on that was good but this is not a barry good poem or story 

Barry the bears story (bazza) so the story starts on Jumping June on Friday it stated were three boys vs one teacher the boys names were James Tama and Leo and the teachers name is Mr Gold oh yeah I forgot to say it was a skipping battle. They began the skip off they were going for at least two minutes and then Leo went out then Tama then it was just between James and Mr Gold and they were going for a bit longer then they both stopped but we counted as James win. Then Leo James Tama had walk around and help other people after the entire school had to go down to the juniors area and there are teams Red Green Yellow Blue and Mr B was telling us what team win and that team was green team and he put a green top on a teddy bear Barry the bear or Bazza the bear and barry the bear wasn’t small it was a big bear. Barry is beautiful bear but he’s a smelly bear tho and yucky but the bear was given to Miss Rogers and Miss Rogers put him on top of her whiteboard above us all high above the ground watching us all but everything that I have said might not be true or am lying about that never no what’s true when your reading a story right. Ok, time to tell you about Barry’s backstory or where he came from all right, it started at a factory where all teddy bears come from the make´s name was Tom, Tom was a really good teddy maker after being there for 4 years. One day his boss died and Tom became the boss no one else was as good at teddy making. So Tom decided to let someone else be encarge and his name was Egg, Egg was not good at making teddys but he was good at making decisions so Tom was happy that he got to make teddys again so he wanted to celebrate so he made a teddy and named that teddy Bazza the bear or Barry the bear. Then Tom went out to get a bite and a drink but when he was gone. Bazza started to move  around and walk to the other teddies and trying to talk to them but he couldn’t so he keeped on walking until he found the door out then he walked out the door then he keeped on walking and walking until he found somewhere he can call home then he found Belfast school and all the kids

welcomed him and played with him and some were mean to him and then Mr B found the teddy and thought of an idea. That idea was to warm up and put him in some clothes. The top was green and he was getting on in front of the entire school. The teddy thought he was special. Lots of kids thought he was amazing and listened to them talk about him and he got to sit above everyone in the class on top of Miss Rogers’ whiteboard. He was so comfy in his top and him being loved was the best thing he thought. He was home he loved this place. The End